tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post7016066731887093938..comments2023-11-19T05:08:35.161-05:00Comments on Eusebeia Philos: coming back by leavingAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09450346739275578678noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-62419838928301514532013-04-30T19:37:48.865-04:002013-04-30T19:37:48.865-04:00Definitely, Heidi. Hope carries one through season...Definitely, Heidi. Hope carries one through seasons of doubt and despair. Its partners are usually Patience and Endurance, though.JayGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15817675980200134668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-85660845130051056622013-04-30T15:36:28.278-04:002013-04-30T15:36:28.278-04:00I see longing and sadness, but also some hope.I see longing and sadness, but also some hope.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-77171351117203063142013-04-30T00:46:08.938-04:002013-04-30T00:46:08.938-04:00very cool. Love the variating rhythms within the ...very cool. Love the variating rhythms within the piece and the variety of styles incorporated within. Excellent read. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-84722968816844289682013-04-29T16:41:26.012-04:002013-04-29T16:41:26.012-04:00loved the ETA was on schedule after the long journ...loved the ETA was on schedule after the long journeyWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-15245170248548746502013-04-29T01:49:22.386-04:002013-04-29T01:49:22.386-04:00It can be hard to find yourself in that outer orbi...It can be hard to find yourself in that outer orbit in relationships, just awaiting a force to pull you back in... loved the way you approached this, excellent poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-88436669177707847452013-04-28T21:13:31.907-04:002013-04-28T21:13:31.907-04:00A great word picture of relationships... The ebb a...A great word picture of relationships... The ebb and flow, I like the return, and the way you get there.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-6732687483399468282013-04-28T15:08:03.932-04:002013-04-28T15:08:03.932-04:00A song of distances and gravity, human and celesti...A song of distances and gravity, human and celestial, with just enough detail to set off the imagery. Our journeys often seem circular, but the point is to go, I think, not where we end up. I like the delicacy and lack of sentimentality in the emotional content, as well.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-16649003554365033272013-04-28T08:57:14.873-04:002013-04-28T08:57:14.873-04:00when you
teleported
back from that
...when you<br /> teleported<br /> back from that<br /> far away look<br /><br />Similar to something I wrote myself insomuch as, theres a sci fi, computerized feel to parts, but reality there as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-89216753588343763182013-04-28T07:35:12.769-04:002013-04-28T07:35:12.769-04:00Very cool write! Love it!Very cool write! Love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-23223172777960686342013-04-28T05:34:26.410-04:002013-04-28T05:34:26.410-04:00I love the last stanza especially, and I know I...I love the last stanza especially, and I know I've been guilty of that teleported faraway look in the past.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-44600336609654711412013-04-27T22:09:05.612-04:002013-04-27T22:09:05.612-04:00This was an amazing journey..I waited in orbit..gr...This was an amazing journey..I waited in orbit..gravity pulled me..I had to read this twice..nicely doneTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-43105512642358168262013-04-27T21:46:34.516-04:002013-04-27T21:46:34.516-04:00So very real and yet in another place that we ofte...So very real and yet in another place that we often find ourselves and you have pulled it altogether. Commenting from dVerse.Reneehttp://reneejustturtleflight.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-14518618742048976792013-04-27T21:40:43.864-04:002013-04-27T21:40:43.864-04:00gravity pulled me
to a place
i never left...I love...gravity pulled me<br />to a place<br />i never left...I love this...we think we are leaving but we are mere satellites circling. Nicely done. -Kat/@beingmamaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-88220819435420873872013-04-27T21:37:25.706-04:002013-04-27T21:37:25.706-04:00"gravity pulled me to a place i never left&qu..."gravity pulled me to a place i never left" I love this. We are satellites, we think we leave but we cannot truly do so. Nicely done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-27058137915292618712013-04-27T20:53:58.737-04:002013-04-27T20:53:58.737-04:00A very interesting and original take on separation...A very interesting and original take on separation..Gravity pulled me to a place I never left..well then,I guess it's home!The way you have captured the confusion is quite brilliant.Cressida de Novahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00169216942864690995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-52526999202111374502013-04-27T18:13:28.902-04:002013-04-27T18:13:28.902-04:00A trip with a difference. Circling like an oldfash...A trip with a difference. Circling like an oldfashioned dance.Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-63727810865912049192013-04-27T18:10:26.222-04:002013-04-27T18:10:26.222-04:00A great feeling of being suspended in time as the ...A great feeling of being suspended in time as the situation takes its natural course. Excellent write!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-14020606629398185982013-04-27T17:38:52.409-04:002013-04-27T17:38:52.409-04:00Beautiful and wise, good ending teleporting back f...Beautiful and wise, good ending teleporting back from the vacuum orbiting. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-80757909320981592782013-04-27T16:45:17.148-04:002013-04-27T16:45:17.148-04:00You say so much in these spare lines, circling the...You say so much in these spare lines, circling the vacuum. Beautiful poem. Susan Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13241514922366571247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-12768462937270312822013-04-27T16:19:33.541-04:002013-04-27T16:19:33.541-04:00waiting in orbit, circling in a vacuum until gravi...waiting in orbit, circling in a vacuum until gravity pulls you back...wow...really way cool images in thisClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-27323704460780428602013-04-27T15:51:28.545-04:002013-04-27T15:51:28.545-04:00"circling a vacuum" - that's a fine ..."circling a vacuum" - that's a fine way to express the sense of absence and longing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-52693733284213326942013-04-27T15:43:02.674-04:002013-04-27T15:43:02.674-04:00Daydreams can be like that!Daydreams can be like that!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-84441913857341929502013-04-27T15:35:51.868-04:002013-04-27T15:35:51.868-04:00Terrific poem - I hope the couple gets together ag...Terrific poem - I hope the couple gets together again- sounds like it - but something being scheduled and happening always a bit different - very interesting take. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-60025765926667730392013-04-27T15:18:31.258-04:002013-04-27T15:18:31.258-04:00I like the idea of gravity pulling you to a place ...I like the idea of gravity pulling you to a place you never left. It expresses to me the feeling of belonging and being rooted! I enjoyed your take!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-13512353126555590522013-04-27T15:09:49.335-04:002013-04-27T15:09:49.335-04:00first, great titling...and an odd bit of wisdom in...first, great titling...and an odd bit of wisdom int hat as well...survival being split time between heart and mind...great acknowledgement there as well...the waiting in orbit, vacuum...got to be a rough disconnected feeling too....nice write sirBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com