tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post9003551898155530123..comments2023-11-19T05:08:35.161-05:00Comments on Eusebeia Philos: ImmersionAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09450346739275578678noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-48479821288888417562013-03-18T10:46:08.157-04:002013-03-18T10:46:08.157-04:00Yet another powerful poem sir...Yet another powerful poem sir...Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-50340932918384794692013-03-15T13:08:39.961-04:002013-03-15T13:08:39.961-04:00oh really love the comparison of the pulsing vein ...oh really love the comparison of the pulsing vein with a wave on blue warm water..so coolClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-23079744396993174622013-03-15T12:01:04.935-04:002013-03-15T12:01:04.935-04:00You've outdone yourself...this is tender and p...You've outdone yourself...this is tender and perfect..Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-71934968749496104052013-03-15T09:31:10.704-04:002013-03-15T09:31:10.704-04:00Ahh, sensuous.Ahh, sensuous.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-71551877075893577522013-03-15T09:09:37.267-04:002013-03-15T09:09:37.267-04:00This is really good. Not only have you aced the fo...This is really good. Not only have you aced the form and delivered beautiful lines, you've managed to engage all five senses in just 22 syllables. Encore, encore....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-73544430472739192732013-03-15T08:55:00.430-04:002013-03-15T08:55:00.430-04:00this was scary to me... like what was going to hap...this was scary to me... like what was going to happen next... thought loved the gentle pen you usedWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-42806976808716183672013-03-15T04:58:14.966-04:002013-03-15T04:58:14.966-04:00Very nice. This almost perfect switch from the nec...Very nice. This almost perfect switch from the neck to the wave. Masterfulbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-17613115639629675042013-03-15T04:54:15.850-04:002013-03-15T04:54:15.850-04:00A very Japanese sensibility here - the neck, the p...A very Japanese sensibility here - the neck, the pulsing vein can be so much more sensuous than anything more obvious.Marina Sofiahttp://findingtimetowrite.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-32634923545869345682013-03-14T23:48:27.019-04:002013-03-14T23:48:27.019-04:00This made me blush a little. You say a lot in thos...This made me blush a little. You say a lot in those few syllables.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-88635082439781762992013-03-14T23:33:18.392-04:002013-03-14T23:33:18.392-04:00a small wave on warm blue... very nice.a small wave on warm blue... very nice.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-52096833937344493612013-03-14T22:38:44.479-04:002013-03-14T22:38:44.479-04:00...beautiful cinquain... and i loved the focus you......beautiful cinquain... and i loved the focus you set up with the scented neck... demonstrating the curves from both the inner / outer view... great one.... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-42235839889468497662013-03-14T20:52:15.115-04:002013-03-14T20:52:15.115-04:00Passionate and with so much feeling. Commenting fr...Passionate and with so much feeling. Commenting from dVerse.Reneehttp://reneejustturtleflight.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-24882631214735298482013-03-14T20:11:01.626-04:002013-03-14T20:11:01.626-04:00Sensitive and sensual - loved the 'small wave&...Sensitive and sensual - loved the 'small wave' so much feeling in so few syllables -KAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-81690653149453641592013-03-14T20:01:23.020-04:002013-03-14T20:01:23.020-04:00Cool poem.
Thoughts:
"Scented"? Older...Cool poem. <br />Thoughts:<br /> "Scented"? Older woman? Maybe I don't know the scenting types.<br /><br />I was curious why you chose "water". I could almost hear "life". Immersed in life! But it, like "blood" ,only has one damn syllable. Yeah, I get it. <br /><br />Loved the pic and the dive into flesh.<br />Sabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-33344544051494632462013-03-14T19:54:32.214-04:002013-03-14T19:54:32.214-04:00Lovely small details to notice. Beautiful cinquai...Lovely small details to notice. Beautiful cinquain!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-60346397699564618982013-03-14T19:49:11.824-04:002013-03-14T19:49:11.824-04:00Thank you, Rowan. Nice to meet you.Thank you, Rowan. Nice to meet you.JayGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15817675980200134668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-85507704446298843952013-03-14T19:48:00.029-04:002013-03-14T19:48:00.029-04:00ow wow...sensual and evocative....love the tactile...ow wow...sensual and evocative....love the tactile in the breath and the pulse....mmm..and the wave...that was almost enough to put it over the top...ha...niceBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-61941403180600186502013-03-14T19:45:33.673-04:002013-03-14T19:45:33.673-04:00I like the scented neck and the pulsing vein like ...I like the scented neck and the pulsing vein like a wave on water ~ Beautiful cinquain ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-53995159338074308242013-03-14T19:38:33.752-04:002013-03-14T19:38:33.752-04:00Very lovely post...good choice of words that defin...Very lovely post...good choice of words that definitely are a moment in time.<br />Thank you<br />PeaceSiggi in Downeast Mainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12977578917775406831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-958861115727578650.post-37210118337843274602013-03-14T19:28:39.813-04:002013-03-14T19:28:39.813-04:00A lovely sensuous observation.A lovely sensuous observation.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09589253190731511955noreply@blogger.com