Tuesday, December 10, 2013

Beyond Eyes

Forever ended
before now began

to capture
each other
in the lens
of our eyes

beyond eyes

next time
we see

     another

will be
memories

light & colors
scents
of our introduction

see us
concealed
parting ways
&
recollections

impressions
of our
sentimental brevity


©Eusebeia Philos 2013

dVerse Poets Pub: Open Link Night #126

10 comments:

  1. life is indeed short...merely a blink in the grand scheme of things...our coming together and our parting..what memories we try to hold onto even if for the breath of our lives.....i like the riddle of those opening lines...

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  2. Regrets, moments with one did not last, a comet in the night. It is a paradox that the brief moments are the ones linger . . . and then are written about . . . in a way beautifully expressive.

    I can relate . . . we probably all can.

    Cheers

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  3. This feels like an instant crush. I love "next time we see another will be memories"

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  4. I specially like this part:

    light & colors
    scents
    of our introduction

    Short and sweet ~ I like the power of saying less, smiles ~

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  5. oh - those first lines made me catch my breath - and then the last line - just beautiful! K

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  6. This is beautiful..it is nice to read your work again..

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  7. How things change from moment to moment and from love to love - nice reflection.

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  8. Apologies if I'm duplicating my previous attempt at a comment, but this made me think of how things change moment to moment and from love to love - nice write.

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  9. the smallest moments usually mean the most... and they stay with us the longest too... this piece makes me think of those we almost didn't take... colorful & great write

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