Sunday, December 15, 2013

Revision

Torn apart

& rebuilt in a year,

this version is an upgrade

with steel skin

& backup soul.


©Eusebeia Philos 2013

2 comments:

  1. Eusebeia, so glad you visited and commented on my blog!

    Ah, this one can be taken quite on the surface or deep within the soul. The choice of "steel skin and a backup soul," quite the commentary on someone. Clever, succinct, and read three times by this poet. Peace, Amy

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    1. Hi, Amy. Yes, this one is short and to the point because it was a micro-poem on Twitter. Have to pack much into few words.Thanks!

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