Sunday, February 23, 2014

Thrown Whispers

Loved ones

 in light

 throw whispers

 over walls -

 hear their joy spread
#tanka
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  1. TruedessaMarch 9, 2014 at 3:34 PM

    this has a lovely feel as I thought of the departed leaving whispers for those on the other side..I don't know that is what came to mind.

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    1. UnknownMarch 9, 2014 at 5:59 PM

      I like your take on it. Of course, that's the best part of poetry, especially micro-poems, I think... just enough to hint or suggest meaning, and letting the reader have their way. Thanks again.

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