Sunday, March 16, 2014

Yesterday's Window

spent the day

away

staring through

yesterday's window,

eyes closed


#tanka #5lines

2 comments:

  1. Yesterday's window ... reminiscing can be meditative and healing. I like your use of "staring" which can be also interpreted as being stuck in the past. An interesting ambiguity in your poem. Nice :)

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    1. You picked up on everything I "said." ...glad there is enough left to ponder... thanks LD

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